I really loved the way the story was presented, especially in the beginning. I usually stop reading a story right away if there's something I don't like about it, but this was so worth reading even with tropes that I'm not fond of. That said the end was surprisingly bad, it felt very rushed and not thought out. It was like the author had so many ideas but a limited number of chapters that could accommodate all of that. I actually like stories that leave a little bit to the imagination and don't spell everything out for you, but there's a relly specific way to it well and I don't think this was well excecuted at all. I also think there was way too much smut, even if it was good and there was actual development while it was happenening, it took up a lot of space in the story. The extras and specials just left me with questions that aren't really meant to be answered with my own imagination. What happened to the new mountain god saga? What else did the mom find out? And worst of all, how will the story combat the gaping plot hole of love between mortality and immortality?
I really loved the way the story was presented, especially in the beginning. I usually stop reading a story right away if there's something I don't like about it, but this was so worth reading even with tropes that I'm not fond of. That said the end was surprisingly bad, it felt very rushed and not thought out. It was like the author had so many ideas but a limited number of chapters that could accommodate all of that. I actually like stories that leave a little bit to the imagination and don't spell everything out for you, but there's a relly specific way to it well and I don't think this was well excecuted at all. I also think there was way too much smut, even if it was good and there was actual development while it was happenening, it took up a lot of space in the story. The extras and specials just left me with questions that aren't really meant to be answered with my own imagination. What happened to the new mountain god saga? What else did the mom find out? And worst of all, how will the story combat the gaping plot hole of love between mortality and immortality?