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An abused girl, Miyazaki, tries to find the meaning to her life through her teacher and her boyfrien...
Most of the time, Mengo Yokoyari's writing is bad bcuz there is no build up to it. Instead of the girl talking about how she feels.. and what is happening, I think she (the author) should try to write about ''what happen'' in one scene, how the interactions would go. Because dialogues are really bad, the interactions are really bad.
Anyways, good idea for a story.
Not a good writing tho. I also think the writer hate changes (afraid of making mistakes in story writing) in her stories so you'll barely have the character being changed or have character development in a way... that is slow and not obvious.
I do like the FACT that she is writing psychology but she doesn't have to, she can relax and fix it slowly...
She rush a lot of stories for no reason...
I love her art, it's very colorful, and the ideas... And the meaning.. but she's (feels like) she's afraid of change.