it's super sad because i reaaallly wanted to like it(my friend is a huge fan)- but a lot of it feels like plot armor, not realistic, and the MC's personality doesn't feel natural in some chapters. I think this story is a good start and has unique elements in comparison to the stories that are being developed rn but yeah not my cup of tea.
i really like it. it's nonsensical, it's really funny, and it's just so nonrealistic that it's enjoyable. it's a very well-made work of fiction that brings out child-like giddiness in reading it. a ridiculous love story that you just can't put down.