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The only thing I don't like is the lack of communication and clarification from both of them in this relationship. They keep hiding things from eo until someone else spills and unnecessary misunderstanding emerge. It doesn't help that Lyle lacks self-confidence and keeps bottling up his feelings. Also Ash always keeps him in dark instead of being upfront about the issue. Sex doesn't solve problems. Communication, trust and respect does. Which currently I find their relationship is lacking. Both love eo and I hope we get to see some growth in the extra chapters
i tote agree w you. ash is lowkey a hypocrite bc he’s always telling lyle to let him know if anything is wrong but he doesn’t do the same and lyle find out somehow and end up being more insecure and closed off… i don’t hate the misunderstanding as much bc i think the writing is rly good and reasonable but def can be annoying sometimes (〜￣△￣)〜
Why does this keep getting worse? Their relationship was so sweet and healthy. But now Ash is just turning into a bully. I don't care about smut right now. I need them to have a conversation. Damn! This was so hard to read.
FOR REALSIES,
I had to skim past it only reading the text bubbles!