I read this story a while back in 5th grade then came back in recent years to reread it and still don’t like it. I hate the age gap between the two not only that but they grew up as siblings! I don’t remember if they’re related or not but it’s still wrong… another things is that the bottom is young asf and hasn’t experienced life outside of the island making him clueless and almost childlike. I hated his design to his lips looked like a fishes mouth anyways. The top was way older and knew that the bottom was inexperienced with life. I was also uncomfortable with them kissing and the bottom calling out “brother” while kissing him.
I loved that the top wasn’t your usual top you’ll see but I hated the story
I read this and I hate how bls have the walking read flag where the mc is raped or sa in the story and then the ml becomes a walking green flag. I hate how almost every bl haves something like that
Reading this was kinda boring especially with dialogue during sex scenes and it’s just missing something
Don’t get me wrong the story is good it’s just that the seme dick looks infected
I just know the artist doesn’t know the real dark skin dihh lmfaaooo the colors are OFFFF
The colors are actually not off, some men js have a redder dih
Baby it’s not red
Pink is real.
Red is real.
Black is real.
Beige is real.
Grayish purple is real.
But whatever shit color the artist is drawing is NOT REALISTIC!!
That’s why it’s throwing me off every time…..
Not that I’am searching for realism is yaoi fiction lol
Why does the bottom look 12 ? Also why is top so big ? I’m pissed off
I read this bs a waste of fucking time…