
Couldn’t they have changed this part bruh……

You must be so used to these scenes based on your tbr, currently reading and read stories. You’ve become so numb when seeing this and it’s really awful. I’m not even going to argue with you for not seeing what is wrong. SA being part of a story is never an excuse, especially when it’s unnecessary. SA will never be okay even in stories.

Do you hear yourself ? So for you consent = fluff ? This isn't grey it's just bad writing. You know it's not the first time I had the unfortunate luck to fall upon your type and the way you always try to make sexual assault appear like a key plot device needed to add depths into the story is not only redundant but also extremely ridiculous, well written "grey" stories don't need to resort to SA to maintain the viewers attention because the authors actually put thoughts into their plot.

Yeah, no, try again! I read books like this outside of the media, too. They’re disturbing but reading well written stories makes you be able to learn which is important and which is clearly unnecessary.
I don’t have any of these type of stories on here cuz they’re genuinely awful. It wasnt even shocking to see what happened today.
Stop trying to defend this chapter, your life is not on the line for it. You can enjoy ‘grey’ stories but never defend the fucked up parts.

And you know this by how? Do you have a camera in my room? Know who I am? The fuck. I know my morals and people dying are horrible. If you wanna bring up kids getting murdered then I’ll let you know that I also found out just now that this author is a z10nist, aka supporting ppl killing kids. Yeah bye you’re dumb asf

girl I knew from the start this wasn’t a cute story from the title alone and I picked this up cuz it seemed promising ???? And this whole argument is about SA but you’re yapping about murder like we r losing the plot.
I knew this was a smut story with some plot but stories like these needs to learn to stay on their own fucking lane cuz SA is never part of smut. Dark romance is belittled to SA, when was that ever romance actually.
Go enjoy this story, I don’t care. I was able to comment whatever I want and I was displeased with this chapter. You made this a whole lot of nothing just trying to defend a whole chapter that’s not even going to give you anything in life but look so immature to other people. Mind you, two of us are already going back and forth with you cuz all you wanna do is act insensitive to the reason why other people are not even okay with it. You’re so buried in so many porn stories that you’re excusing this. Maybe come back to me when your brain grows.

@raquelle
Lol so you still think you got the high ground mate ? Talking about me being too invested over something fictional but instead of dropping the thing after getting blocked you use another account to continue to whine
You're the only one not seeing how ridiculous you are being
PS : unless you're the one who posted the orginal comment blocking me just means neither of us can directly comment to each other
spraying acid on his face so no girl will like him ever again