Wow this is actually a pretty cute story. I thought the dude was gunna a lot more manipulative based on how their relationship started but he has been surprisingly honest about his feelings.
Oohhhh now this is the freaky stuff I dig about this type of fictitious story!! Honestly I kinda love darker stories that can go into depth about more complex characters and relationships
Ohhhh I’ll be real, I didn’t not expect this story to have this much depth or complex character motivation. Kinda thought it’d devolve into a pwp story but I’m loving this.
Bro this is starting to irritate me, he already tried to get close to her through friendship and it didn’t work. Now he’s doing the same thing again?? Man I just want to wait till it’s complete so I can skip past this bs
I really am confused what is going on with their relationship bc how are they gonna say it's awful to play with miss Pendleton's feelings JUST to do it later on (Mr Dalton talking to Miss Lance)
She said no with her reaction of course he need to come back slowly if he doesn't want her to run away with her low self esteem
Wha???? Ain’t no way that was the actual ending?? That’s so fucking dumb.
Welp this was a good chapter to pop back into, see yall when it reaches 300 cuz with this pace it’s inevitable
Top dude sucks, the art was good but why tf would the story make it clear that the lil puff ball guy had BDSM related trauma, go out of the way to introduce a safe word and then explicitly ignore that safe word??!?? I get consent is rarely important in these stories but they are going out of their way to make top dude into a rapist.
Not to mention the Fucked up dynamic they had going on from the start to make cream puff feel indebted to him. Why are these decisions being made??
Yeah that bothered me as well after he just told you he had BDSM trauma you go head and do it anyway.And then forget to use a safe word which he was clearly mad about but didn’t know how to voice cause you put him and you in this weird relationship where he has to fuck to pay the bills that weren’t even his.
Honestly the tope starting the relationship like that is only going to come back to bite him in the butt,plus him refusing to recognize his “friend” is weird.
Man this is so much more dramatic than I expected. It’s kinda irritating, there is so much bs that gets in the way of the main couple and it seemed like she was constantly getting into stuff that stressed out the main dude, he’d get over it, they’d make up and the it happened again and again. Lowkey don’t care about them at this point
Fuck man, she’s so hot