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I stopped reading this early days but I decided to come back and finish it since we're on the side stories and the rating is pretty high. But it was kind of a disappointment. I'm not sure if the author was rushed but they opened up a lot of plot lines and then just vaguely wrapped them up or pretended like it never happened like we're supposed to forget?

We don't actually find out what he was up to while he was gone; we don't know what happens with the gang leader; and we don't actually see the ML develop any personal goals, which is something I feel like the character really needed. Everything felt quite shallow, like a cop out on what could have been a truly interesting story.

And ML is bordering on being a sex pest. How many times does someone have to say enough before your dick gets tired mate.