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The story was really well written and the art was nice too! But honestly, when it got towards the end there's a certain point where I felt like the author didnt transition nicely into the climax of the story. I think it's not a case of the author wanted to rush things to end and tried to tie up all loose ends. It's more of a feeling where more chapters would have been needed and perhaps here and there the story could be told in a more interesting and exciting way... some extras and side chapters would have been nice too! But still: I'd recommend it! I'm just a bit sad because I feel like it could have been even better. Still, read it, you won't regret it!