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Tbh, I don't like both of them. The black hair guy and the husband. I hate the husband obviously but the black haired guy is just... Sight... I don't like how it feels like he's saving her? I don't know if I'm explaining myself but it's like, she needs him when it's clearly she doesn't. While I understand the black-haired character's role as a saviour, I fear it may undermine the agency and independence of the female protagonist. Despite her hard work and maturity, she is still being portrayed as someone who needs rescuing, which is not only unrealistic but also disrespectful to the character. Instead, I would prefer to see her take control of her own life and find strength in her own abilities.
(Chat got helped me with the last part cuz I didn't know how I could explain myself)