
The art style is so so. I have seen worse. Add shades, to make it look better and more 3d.
HOWEVER, I can't forgive the chapters made out of a page or two and called chapters. Usually a chapter is at least 60 panels, not 10. Some of the chapters are just 2 panels. Better do updates once a month and upload at least 20-30 panels. Also don't add too much speach for a single panel as with the king. It looks unnatural.

Wow. Did no one else noticed that Shen Yu have all his fingers, when one should to be missing?

It is still a mistake to draw his finger whole. Also I am pretty sure it was more than the the first knuckle, if you check ch 61, where we see the box with his finger, it is surely drawn more than the tip. And in ch 65 we have his hand with all 5 fingers completely whole. If it wasn't the bandage on his hand, we can say it was his mother's finger, but we all know, he wouldn't cut her finger.

I hadn't read the novel, I don't want to read it, before it is completed in English, but I was really impressed with ch 61 of the manhua. It is rare character like Shen Yu to actually go with their plan and even cut their own finger. That is why I noticed that he have them all now, his hands have big part of the story line, it is easy to follow them.
And that is what is making me slightly upset with the author. Such a thing shouldn't be forgotten, because even if it is not anymore part of the plot it is still a big part of the character and this is the main character we are talking about. And this repeats for a few chapters and will repeat in the chapters after.
I am not just being b*tch, but it is sad that the author doesn't care to remember the cut finger, when it literally happened few chapters ago. For me this is a big part of the character, this is not a bruise or a cut missing in a far away positioned pannel or even missing eyes to make the drawing process faster. After all it is easier to draw one finger less than more.

He should have aborted. But if he had then there would be no happy end with Keith... Very stupid.

He totally didn't abort so there is plot development.
In real life, yes, others don't have a say in one's abortion, but this is manga. Not real life.
It this case was better if he aborted, but like I said, if he did then they wouldn't end up together.
And as for the baby it was better to be aborted. I can imagen what type of a shitty life it is going to have with a oppressed mother and playboy father.
At least put note on the chapter name that it is on another language, not English.