beta
it starts off being slowburn as if jihan was gonna fall for jae slowly but surely but it felt extremely abrupt. and the side stories hello??? what the fuck was that building??? and jae being kidnapped??? the fox???
if u were gonna add supernatural elements why so sudden and finish it off super quickly, like i barely understood what was happening but theyve already brushed off the fact that THE FOX KIDNAPPED JAES GRANDPA