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i still remember when i first came across this story. around the part where the climax was just settling in, i almost dropped it. idk if it's the dialogue, the sequences, the sudden timeskips, or the art itself, but at first it really is hard to get "attached" to the story because it seemed unstable/incomplete. most hours, i'd wonder if there are parts i missed because the pacing is so out of place all throughout. though halfway thru the falling action, the story became much more easier to take in, it wasnt really much that id go so far as call it special but there's finally cohesion to everything albeit little by little. this wasn't the best but the sheer thought behind it is too much to pass on even if the execution is lacking.