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I like it, but i wish it was slightly different ?? Idk i kinda wish the concept wasnt that she body hopped into Peony. I feel like it wouldve been nice to see him and our MC as the OG Peony together and watch him grieve, but move on from his late wife. I kind of liked the whole concept of Peony being from the enemy’s family and he was a man that had lost his wife — it would’ve made for a nice slowburn. Plus it wouldve been nice to somewhat see the differences between the two women and how he views them both, but maybe im a sucker for painful/tragic romances. Gaby was his bittersweet beginning, but Peony was his healing. I do still enjoy the concept of this though so i will happily continue !! ʅ（◞‿◟）ʃ