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The Kimishima brothers each have a secret: Takumi who wants to embrace his older brother, and Hikaru...

  • Author: Cam
  • Genres: School Life / Yaoi

i tried so hard to like this manga but it kept disappointing me throughout the storyline and the art. The art is pretty but i am frustrated that a lot the times scenes that are supposed to be serious or sexy or should give us deeper feelings, the mangaka will draw some funny expression and actions which killed the that should be built. The story and pacing is also not that good personally as a reader, the first intimate scene should be drawn properly and not be skipped over with just one scene and one dialogue, there was no shock, no resistance or anything when the brother kissed the older brother at the very least give us some build up of emotions or angst or something. Since it is 6 chapters only, i tried to just complete it. Every few pages just bothers me with mismatch emotions that i find it hard to enjoy it. i wanted to give it 1.5/5 but i guess some younger readers might accept the more 'kiddish' art on a serious psychological storyline.