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i love everything about this. for me, this story was properly planned like it will only involve the emperor, two dukes, the informants, and the mages. i almost got cringed when they had the "eyes" but whatever. The story's progress and flow are good, plus the comedic and romance scenes, aren't random at all, like it was properly formulated to include it there to make things still have the concept of romcom without getting further from the plot. i love how it has a hint of feminism on it. Yay to the concept that women can only have powers and will be not affected by it! I also have to deduce that the concept of the emperor also being "obsessed" with the silver witch has something to do with the law that emperor's cant interfere when their wives is birthing. I just can't get the point of it, but why would they inquire such a ridiculous law???