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I wonder if it’s the translation or maybe just not written well, but the MC feels really off. It’s hard to pinpoint, but he feels hypocritical.
Maybe we need more explanations of his thought process and how he feels afterwards behind certain actions. If not he feel kinda like the same assholes he looks down on.
For example the scene where someone did something he did in the past, and he said the same thing to her that the asshole did to him. Like it just feels nasty. Maybe if he elaborated more… but the way he acts and his facial expression while it being something the people he looks down on would do… it’s something else.