beta
Tbhhhh the idea is THERE like it’s really good im still gonna read it. BUT the way it’s written isn’t good, i mean there are NO expressions on their faces and lowkey MC doesn’t seem that likable. He keeps on saying “this and that will die anyways” or idk like is he even trying to stray from him “villain” pathway ??
Also art itself isn’t that good but that’s okay cuz everyone starts out not amazing but the expressions are def a bummer