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Personally, as I would have written it, I would have had Rei ask for Chacha in that world and constant news of his parents. I wish Rei had become genuinely interested in magic and wanted to learn more about it, and had embarked on a journey with Albert (and Chacha) to gain knowledge together.
The chapters are very rushed, although it is not a story that I hate, I would have liked it to have taken a different direction.