beta
Okay so, you can clearly tell what this manga was TRYING to do. But they really just fucked it up. Like first with the blackmailing, any time they sort of get anywhere in their relationship, it's because the top blackmailed him.
And the pacing. I'm not surprised that it's fast, most BL manga's are. But it really was not going to hurt them to put a bit of filler in between.
Like how do you not know if you're gay, but think you might only be attracted to one male. But instead of actually thinking about it, you force yourself on him and proclaim your love for him? While also being a virgin???