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Xaos August 9, 2025 3:25 am

I do like this and will continue reading but I am tiring of the same storyline ever few chapters where the enemy traumatizes him with the ways in which they kill him over and over and it's supposed to create some kind of dilemma for him, but after so many times of the same plot device, it rings very hallow and it doesn't make much sense in regard to the flow of the story. Like, if they actually showed him traumatized and dwelling on it after each fight, it'd make a bit more sense cause it's compounding trauma that he never works through, but he literally works through it each time and that specific traumatic event is ever mentioned again, and then the next boss does the same thing and it's always the same angle without any actual substance

Xaos July 30, 2025 8:18 am

I'm not gonna lie, the drawn out trope of denying someone's very clear feelings cause of a misunderstanding and then some self righteous bullshit of protecting them is getting aggravating. Obviously the take away from that guy's story wasn't to not accept their love or to not have them fall in love to begin with, the issue was clearly him projecting his own insecurities onto her and then after saying he'd marry her, just randomly doing a 180 after 3 months with no warning, he literally just broke her heart. Him being weak and pathetic is his own fault, and the MC not having any emotional development past a 12 yr old is grating. Literally just communicate. I understand miscommunication is like the bread and butter of romance, but 34 chapters of one miscommunication with zero growth of any characters is just ridiculous.

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