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am i the only one that was so incredibly disappointed with how this ended?? am i missing something?? there was SO many plot holes mf looked like swiss cheese. what happened when doha sent MC (i forgot his name) away in the car?? what on earth was that rushed chase arc from doha that literally did not last more than a chapter? what did doha do to get the antagonist off his back?? why was he suddenly amicable with his friend/brother despite there still being SO many unresolved issues- like how the guy never once believed in doha and how doha never got to prove his innocence???
the story was fine up until the most half assed climax i have ever seen, before promptly taking a nose dive. there’s a difference between creative liberty and leaving things open and ambiguous for your readers to interpret differently and uniquely, and then there’s just being a straight up lazy writer who so clearly rushed the end of this story and wanted to be done with it as soon as possible. like did i skip a whole season? i don’t understand how a story can be derailed and thrown down the shitter SO quickly…
i finished this story, but im left with more questions than when i started :/