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Really good plot, the characters and their dynamics are cute. But it's really lacking, someone said they didn't fully adapt it so that makes sense, cause, the comp was a side quest huhu, that's the og thought, missed opportunity for what happens in the company (which is a huge loss cause he spent so much time talking about not letting it drop in the future, ending it here seems like he's indecisive with his goals). Also the ship was funny to me with how everyone else acted, but Hyun reciprocating just makes me uncomfortable. Because he's fully aware of the age difference between them, it's just an ick of mine (regressors getting love interests, especially with ones they met as a kid).

Honestly, it's super late rn and a shitty day, but I've been rereading and continuing this webtoon for the past 3days and I just finished it. And I don't know if I'll be able to explain it well, but we ball.

This is honestly one of the best action webtoon I've read. It doesn't have any complicated magic systems or sci-fi elements, it's quite literally real life portrayed through the eyes of a bunch of kids with backstories that are either relatable or just pitiful. It's so GOOD. I've never quite read anything like this, each story having it's own uniqueness and effect, the character dynamics, and the fight scenes where even you can't tell who'd win at some points because the narrative makes sure to uplift both fighters regardless of which side they are, unless it's super obvious who would. And the character developments here?? My goodness, they're so wholesome. It encapsulates so much about the youth and how they act, you'd be hating them one day and then understanding and even finding them endearing at another.

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I wanna appreciate the over-all writing more, but it's really just peak narrative you know? It's so well done and simple and yet it touches so much about society. I wanna talk about Donald though, yk for much of the chapters here I kept wondering how his character will end because he's just so powerful that I felt that him being defeated was questionable in itself. And I'm so glad he wasn't defeated, it's just so badass how the author wrote this, that some fights can't be won and that's ok yk? It's not the end, it's realistic and I appreciate it so much. Also the ending of his character, it caught me off guard that I screamed and called it cliche, and then the more I read the more that I had to agree that yes. My gosh, it's perfect. He literally became a legend, he's something you can't surpass now. IDK how to explain this it's just so amazing how this well written character's legacy won't end because he died? And it's so perfect? Because literally I could not imagine how else he'll end if he didn't, like so what if he got beat or that his empire collapsed? He could just do it again bc he can. But that was so bleak! And him being defeated and ending it there just wasn't in character. So him dying was perfect my gosh. IT'S JUST SO GOOD DUDE.

One thing you'll truly appreciate in this webtoon is that each character has their own arc and development and their endings are just right. It doesn't take being a main character to have a well developed ending, sometimes the mc is simple while the characters who you thought wouldn't matter after being defeated grows as a person in the end. And that's what's so good about this, the realism about how each person, no matter their role, can grow differently regardless of their disposition. I think it's written well.

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Honestly, I haven't finished reading yet, and I don't know if I will, but I'm almost caught up with the recent update, so I'll write this while my thoughts are fresh, though it's late so I can't promise being articulate.

Anyways, tbh, the story DOES have a lot of potential, so far the writing seem to have great specialty with fight scenes, especially in integrating magic systems, monster design, and even cultural differences between groups. I especially liked the detail with the mercenaries. It became promising to me because of these reasons, despite the obvious plot holes that give way for the MC to easily take advantage, I say this as there is a great lack of actual strategic or intellectual influence for each character. Most of the arcs in here are solved through brute strength, and the predicaments presented are cliche and rather obvious. All is dandy though, I'm able to appreciate those.

I'm just dissapointed with how the author writes women, as well as how the artist draws them. The maid uniform was such a red flag to me since the early chapters, and it bothers me that it didn't change at all. That small boob gap that doesn't contribute to anything, it's not even a good design, it looks so random. The exposed back? What type of maid uniform is that. And the fact that she's the only one who wears it. During the monster forest arc she even wore a cape that had her back exposed too, like what's the point. Then the panels where she fights focuses a lot on making her jump to show her ass, legs, and boob physics. She wasn't even in the early fight panels in that arc, not until the last, and when she was shown she was just being a mother hen huhu.

Other female characters too. They were given no depth in the early chapters, just roles as a sister and a daughter, and were only present to help the MC with other characters or arcs, they were just there for a role and not as another character like most of the male characters here. After that said role they weren't seen or mentioned again, like Gilbert's daughter like bro. She's supposed to be special to his character based off of his backstory, and current situation, and yet nothing.

Also the way the artist draws the female characters is so dissapointing, there's a lot of boob action. The male characters have such unique body types, even the bg characters, and the female characters are just the same like ??? Big boobs, wide hips, petite figure and youthful face. It honestly made me uncomfortable with how Belinda is sometimes presented as a potential fl, even teased by some bg characters, when she's been taking care or Cecil since he was a child.

Anyways, yadayada, there's potential here that wasn't properly explored or executed. It feels shallow atp I guess? And just a lot of gooning no development for some. It's just sad. There's REALLY potential here I swear, I really did like the world building but it lacks a lot,, I wish they strengthened it more before execution.

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Yes, they're clearly actors, it's obvious they're practicing. The problem is the plot itself, out of all the directions the creator can go for, what they can act and practice, it chooses THAT? that's the problem.

A certain type of age gap plot I can read, but this is just xhajjd the childhood scene was just??? There's just something oddly specific about this that puts me off.

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