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Would give this no stars if I could, but I can't. I don't feel like writing an essay today as to why this is ASS. I stopped like chapter 9 and I really don't care if it's gets better. I don't care if esper/top was kidnapped and had his body ripped apart and then was revived. I don't care about his suffering, or any stupid redeeming that the author might do later. If you want to write bad p*** in smutty stories that's fine but don't try and take yourself seriously and do a whole story. I'd also love to point out that the moment the guide is the bottom, they have no power in the relationship. I've seen in other esper bl's, that the top is the guide and the bottom is an esper. But the moment the bottom becomes a guide it's the worst thing ever. Lol