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I don't know man. I am NOT happy that the ML used the MC as bait and planned on him getting harmed and using that as a way to tie him to himself. Especially when it was so obvious that the Uke was pretty much his already. All he had to do was ask. This type of behavior isn't excuse able. Authors always just gloss over this sort of thing too.

I think right up until the last 2 chapters this has been a very compelling read with a plot that isn't obvious (which is oh so refreshing) and absolutely beautiful artwork. The way bodies is drawn is absolutely elegant. If I had one thing to complain about is that the MC is supposed to be crippled but the only way this is show is by him using a crutch. There are absolutely no signs of being injured on his body. No atrophying or anything.

I'll keep reading but I have a feeling that this behavior by the Seme is going to be glossed over which I really really really hate. It's poor writing. He might have some sort of redemption arch, but again, there is no forgiving this type of action. MC really should just go with ML2, but of course that won't happen.