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The story is too slow for me, it doesn't seem to change story-wise. How many attempts on her life will we see, and how many times will the assassins get let off. The MC, doesn't seem to have any power considering his status. Her very innocent upbringing has made her weak and open to abuse from outsiders. She just doesn't spot the threat signs. Her parents were the strongest magicians, what happened to her? Could it be her powers were sealed?! The story would then make sense, to me anyhow.