beta
well, the art is good, and solid, the issue is that the story doesn't make me interested or invested in it at all, like, come on? maybe a bit more story telling or background, the MC is very lame rn, on chapter 11. its very clear that they are setting mc up and the F protagonist of the game.
the demons in it are very wishy washy, I want to know more side characters and the people around MC more, while the og demon lord of the body had a sister. its pacing and story telling is very bland on telling her experience with him. bruh...I likely won't read this again.
the story begins with streamer mc playing 3pov fighting game as the female protagonist against a white hair demon lord. and losing, then he got sucked into the game after wanting to try it again. its on his lil sister birthday too. she ran out crying dawg. bro, it was streaming on real time, did the people watching know the drama? idk cuz it wasn't on the manga.
bro got sucked in on the moment the f protagonist killed a black hair demon lord, into the body of the demonload that just died. bro then kinda spilled everything like "where is this" etc etc panicking out loud. and found out bro can use controller to control her uncurious body to fight to kill the demons after him cuz in actuality, the demons planned for the black hair demon lord to died cuz he got weak or something. idk the reason but bro is hella weak now.
after killing them bro went into the house and found his old room but with white outlines. and shit. bro has a system where how many demons he kills he earns the right to use it or some shit
the issue that is its not even him doing the killing? it counts if the protagonist killed under his command I think, which is cool and all but then remember bro is the demon lord???
idk why does he need to kill all demons, that himself included???? idk man kinda useless to do cuz the f protagonist hates demons and naturally would do that?
anyway now is just him sticking to the F protagonist, and getting beaten by anything that is stronger than him and don't like him. bro is also trash in character, like, shameless? not in the good way tho.(●￣(ｴ)￣●)