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Stories are like combs of honey, layered structure and intricacies make plot and characters more cohesive and sweet to eat.. (or whatever taste you like) but this feels like unwiped ASS! and I know we are 11 chapters in but like what the fuck!?
Nothing about this feels natural or the plot makes a WHOLE lot of sense, also hate hate HATEEEE plots that do the whole "I am straight but that made me gay!" Like imagine a lesbian gets turned straight like that?? Or a gay man by a woman?? Author would have been cancelled agessss ago!
Huuu.. well the chapters are still in progress let's see, personally have 0 hope for this though