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Are you telling me that the 4 commanders of the King's Army KNOW that Abel is the King's Regas and left him WITHOUT PROTECTION while he's asleep knowing that A MEMBER OF THE COUNCIL IS IN THE BARRACKS so that Abel can WALK AROUND AT NIGHT to the King's barrack and NO ONE NOTICED HIM SCREAMING TO BE LET IN?!?!?!?!
Sorry. No. No F**KING WAY that's possible. Considering the personalities of the character's that would NEVER HAPPEN.
Ugh... such an absurd whole in the plot just so they can somehow separate Abel from the King.... tsc. I hate this. Such a good story having this huge mess up? Ugh...
Well... I'll continue reading it, though ahahahaha I reeeally wanna see that member of the council being obsessed with Abel LOL He'll go down a fall of his own making. I know it.
I promise the story is worth sticking around for, there are just little moments where you have to suspend your belief because it is again just a story. They can make unrealistic aspects occur to further the plot (even if it pisses us off lol.)
Ooh I'm sticking with this story!
This is the 2nd — huge! — plot hole I noticed?!
Yes.
Will I stop reading this story because of it?
Nope.
Ahaha This is too good to be dropped because of this. I'd need something bigger than all of the good parts of the story so far to make me drop it.
I have the memory of a goldfish, but if I remember correctly in the novel, one of Karas’ men was sent to Abel.
Also, they want to keep Abel hidden as much as possible, especially since one of the council elders was present. They need to distance themselves — as well as Karas’ close aides — because the council elders have a lot of spies.
Well, if that's the case, then how is Abel walking around the camp, making a fuss in front of Karas' tend, and being dragged away by a mere "tool" of a boy? Isn't it just weird?
Like I said on my last comment, it made no sense for the to leave the King's Regas by himself knowing who he is and how important he is. And now... a huge fire broke down and they are just..... chilling? Like... the captains or whatever, the 2nds in command are just... chilling while looking around the damage the fire made?
And now, instead of a proper investigation, they'll just assume Abel died because of a shoe parts that they found? Really?
And then what? The King will wake up and they'll say: "Well, we all knew before you who he was and how important he was to you, but we were to busy doing ABSOLUTELY NOTHING instead of protecting YOUR REGAS as much as we are protecting YOU when the enemy is LITERALLY IN OUR BASE. But... Hey! We ended up finding a PIECE of ONE SHOE and though... OPS! He might be dead AGAIN! I mean... He already died once, eh? Who cares, right your majesty?" *wink wink*
Like WTF IS WRONG WITH PEOPLE?!
No. Sorry. There were sooo many possibilities to make Abel be separated from them and go through a growth process but you're telling me that THIS HUGE PLOT HOLE is what we went for? FML. Seriously. Such a good story being mistreated by it's own creator. Just sad...
Well... now it's time to wait for the next week, I guess. Let's hope this is not the end of this season otherwise it will but just an agonizing down period with a bitter taste on our mouths due to poor writing until we actually see some development.
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