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I recently read Chapter 29 and so far, it’s has been great and for me, it has a good telling of the world building. Though, I feel like the plots and feats of the characters are being randomly thrown to the point that it is quite overwhelming. I also think that the Omegaverse plot was quite a peculiar choice since even without the Omegaverse plot, it would still be interesting nonetheless.
Due to these, there’ll be tendencies that the some plot may create holes and they may never be talked about again. Still, take my opinion as a grain of salt. But I’ll continue to read it through out, maybe even read the novel ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶