SantanReincarnation December 12, 2025 6:17 am

I love this story, but I’m not a fan of how the author writes the female characters. They're so underdeveloped. They lack consistency, depth, and a sense of their own identity (?? I'm not sure if that's the right word).

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In the early chapters, I really loved Min Juri as a character. It was refreshing to see a girl who’d been with the MC since day one, someone who seemed supportive and actually likable (unlike that FMC from solo leveling). But then the writing starts tweaking lol. Min Juri likes Ryu, yet at the same time she likes Black Scythe? Yes, they’re the same person, but she doesn’t know that. And yes, it’s okay to like more than one person, but girl is literally hitting to see who'll bite. On top of that, she’s stalking him in the early chapters (god forbid a woman has a hobby jk).

There’s also a scene where all the girls are fighting over Black Scythe and acting like they’re his jealous girlfriends, super insecure just because they aren’t getting the attention they expect. Min Juri and the actress girl even get into a fight with Yammy after discovering she’s partnered with Black Scythe. Like… bffr, all of this for a guy? Why act that when you already have feelings for someone else?

And I also don’t like the actress (girl can’t think for herself), the president (bro why are you jealous of your girl’s success?), and the servant or whatever (get your act together and stop acting like a dog).

And another frustrating part is that Min Juri had the potential to be great. She’s independent, compassionate, and thoughtful. But the author doesn’t give her real depth or growth. It ends up feeling like she’s there solely for the MC, not to be her own person with her own meaningful story. (I stopped reading halfway so there might still be development)

I’d also like to add that the author barely gives screen time to the little brother, and there’s almost no interaction, even though he’s on the cover. He ends up sidelined, forgotten, and lonely. My shalaaa huhu(/TДT)/

    SkyFlowersBlade December 12, 2025 10:55 am

    Your criticisms are valid, but I must remind you that you're expecting too much from a generic manga author. Furthermore, I think many who read this appreciate what you criticized, so prepare for a barrage of attacks. Solo Leveling is generic garbage, and the novel is a copy of three other novels. In fact, I find it very funny that they attack the Seoul Station's Necromancer manga, when the novel was written 9 to 10 years before the Solo Leveling novel. Their lack of brains is shameful. Fans find it epic and the pinnacle of fantastic writing, when the narrative skills of most novel and manga authors are quite meh.

    Yhz December 12, 2025 9:31 pm
    Your criticisms are valid, but I must remind you that you're expecting too much from a generic manga author. Furthermore, I think many who read this appreciate what you criticized, so prepare for a barrage of a... SkyFlowersBlade

    Realest comment eva, wished we could like replies under a comment too

    NickName December 12, 2025 10:07 pm

    Nooooo the brother's my favorite (/TДT)/

    Juhoon December 14, 2025 7:38 pm

    I dont think min juri likes scythe romantically like she likes ryu(mc)

    It reads more like admiration

SantanReincarnation December 10, 2025 1:49 am

“and say 'I won't go anywhere anymore' ”
possessive lover are we?/j

    Akira December 11, 2025 1:37 pm

    I know he mean that to that gorgyl or whtever it is but yeah that got me flustered
    ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄ i mean he really do whatever it takes to take him back right? Thats real sweet

SantanReincarnation December 8, 2025 3:32 pm

I HATE HOW SOME OF YOU FAILED TO UNDERSTAND THAT THIS IS NOT A SITUATIONSHIP OR SOME MODERN TIKTOK LABEL YOU INVENT UGHH THIS SPECIFICALLY REMIND ME OF VEIL MANGA

SantanReincarnation December 8, 2025 1:15 am

I'm dying I need someone to RECOMMEND me this type of intimacy

    Gil December 8, 2025 1:44 am

    I need it too!!!

SantanReincarnation December 5, 2025 3:44 am

I need someone to recommend this type of PATHETICNESS

SantanReincarnation November 29, 2025 9:57 am

The comments are making me curious about this. I need to know if the romance part is well played...

    Jai December 1, 2025 5:23 pm

    YES. Here's the confirmed fl's: JUST 3 WIVES NO HUSBANDS (unfortunately)

SantanReincarnation November 25, 2025 3:10 pm

Is this a safe place to say that I have this creeping fantasy of being used by that frog, however she wants (tbh, this applies to all of them lunatics but that's too greedy)

    kuks November 25, 2025 3:45 pm

    Most of us also wants that

SantanReincarnation November 12, 2025 9:32 am

I REALLY and ABSOLUTELY NEED to see his step brother in action with the brother in-law

SantanReincarnation November 8, 2025 6:40 am

Our mc just gotta pick between “the one who put effort to make him happy” vs “the one who make him depressed” and still manage to chose the wrong one

I still love him tho

SantanReincarnation November 4, 2025 1:21 pm

OHHH OUR FEMALE LEAD IS HERE ><

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