beta
i vibe with the smut scenes. they’re just so intimate and intense, especially considering they’ve both been celibate for 10 years. i’m sorry but i’m a sucker for faithful first loves that didn’t end well the first time ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄ . and, not to diss any other BL, cause i also read those, guilty as charged, it had none of that “whoa he’s big,” “his **** is the size of my forearm,” “let’s do it one more time. i promise it’s the last round,” “x-ray of the intestine” (⊙…⊙ ). i’m revealing too much of myself lol
the story is really good on its own, but the sex adds on to the yearning and unspoken emotions ლ(´ڡ`ლ)