beta
The heroine whose male leads wee stolen by an extra that didn't even appear in the original work... ...
so far so good, and no cliché storyline. I would say that the beginning is a bit slow paced but I think that it was a good beginning since it covers the background story of each character. Hmm... the direction of the story seems to be interesting also and the FL and ML including the rest seems to be well drawn, the storyline is just beginning so I would say 9/10, the progression is consistent, and plot is original. Hoping to see more! :)