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Never expected the side stories would be something like this. I’m pleasantly surprised.
The premise and the pacing of just this chapter alone was well done in my opinion. The viscount’s gradual realization didn’t feel rushed to me at all, and he’s actually a lucky man to have such people in his fiefdom. I expected pitchforks, torches, and mutual destruction on both sides, however, his people only acted like him to make him realize how he treated them
AND gave him a chance to change for the better. I’m surprised no one spat on him despite what he did. Decent people. I fully support his desire to change; if only the son was not a dumbass. It’s a tough battle ahead (๑•ㅂ•)و✧