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I'm having a difficult time distinguishing Jenewyn from his older brother. In my eyes, they look very similar if not the same ╥﹏╥ I only know which is which if I stare at it for too long, or the most effective indicator - the color in the background xD Jenewyn's bright, colorful, vibrant. In contrast, his older bro is dark, cold, menacing.
That's only looking at the characters and not considering how they act/speak.
Lastly, I keep reminding impatient self that this is slow burn and that at least not only does it update but also let's us know that the stove is on, and not just a delusion ╮(￣▽￣)╭