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Girl idk how y’all expected mc to call the fucking police because even an adult would be pissing his pants in that scenario
That fucker TELEPORTED
Anyways, speaking of adults WHERE THE FUCK ARE THEY
I’m about to drop this shit bro the initial chapters were pretty interesting but damn what the fuck
Maybe I lack patience but I will give it some time
I feel like I’m reading those toxic bls in third pov
Or rather
One toxic seme two victim uke
Fucking weird
I remember I got a lot of hate for calling mc a bad character, and in the comments I find someone who read the novel say the same thing, that he is “two faced”
They also said it’s a toxic story with toxic characters
See I hope it’s a misunderstanding
But I feel like it’s not
Because I knew right away from the mc’s thought bubbles that he wasn’t a “complex” character but a mean one WHETHER OR NOT HE DID CONTRIBUTE OR DID TAKE ACTIONS
Actions do not ONLY contribute to a character when clearly the character says he doesn’t want to yet he FEELS like to
Weird
But I didn’t mind because this is the first time I’m seeing a mc like this
I saw potential in Yohan but that commenter made me lose hope
I hope this story turns out to be good because it HAS IMMACULATE POTENTIAL
And I hope the characters are portrayed better and hope they aren’t toxic
But what I hope the abuser loses his balls and for the uke’s to to brutually assault him (beat) every fucking day
REVERSE BULLY