bring the rubric out, I'm pretty sure it has presentation assessment, and compare both of your works based on it.
also why didn't you ask her why she didn't like your work? you could've edit it out instead of her doing a whole new one. reply
I don't know man maybe you have a thing for pain? try infecting pain on other parts of your body and get your booty hole dam fixed or you ain't shitting or sitting 2 reply
any genre is okay, maybe no hetro unless is really good. for example, "countdown to love" : both boys can see see a timer in the sky that no one else see, and they wait till it goes to zero. "11:59": mc relives the same day and once it hits 12 am, the day resets, he tires to breakout of this loop.
did have you ever written a fanfic
