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i finished reading this just now and its a really interesting concept, just wish it was developed more and didnt have a rushed ending. ik most mangas here arent published novels meant to be best sellers, but my thoughts are this:
1) the 180 of siyeon thinking to himself "i need to find a way to break up with him" just a few chapters before the ending to then him suddenly turning lovey dovey and never even mention that idea again (not even to say he changed his mind) was definitely wacky and i wish we had that moment where we, the readers, can say "siyeon fell in love with taekyung right here"
2) i wish they had conversations more, i dont disagree/side with either of them more so i wish they had at least one heart to heart where siyeon put his foot down about how taekyungs obsessive nature pissed him off and the reasons why taekyung acted that way or even why he was so infatuated with siyeon (which is the next point) bc while i like possessive tops, with how much siyeon hated it (even his best friend) i couldnt find myself to enjoy it
3) their interactions were cute but chemistry wasnt really there (which is said a lot by siyeon "i only like his face" so again the lovey dovey ending felt weird) i know they had that conversation of "it was love at first sight" but really it was lust at first sight, i wish the manga delved into why taekyung was so infatuated with siyeon in the first place, especially since it was apparently his first relationship with a man
4) the world building definitely couldve been more delved into, like both the supernatural aspects and idea of hitmen, it doesnt seem like every human has supernatural abilities and only those who intake the pill do, so i really wanted to see siyeons first reaction to finding out he can control freezing elements or even a flashback to his first kill, that conversation he had with taekyung about how he felt confined bc of his job was a hit with me, wish they got more development for his emotional/mental state
besides those points i did love the manga and WISH WE GOT TO SEE LIM! and me personally im not miserable enough to hate joy and wonder for the artists silly faces, i smiled at a lot of them and did enjoy the art style for this!