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!!WARNING!! Rant ahead about how ass this story was! Some people absolutely cannot stand yaoi's being criticized the slightest and if that is you, do not read further ahead and don't reply with something stupid because idgaf! This is your warning
First of all, this story was horrible and I feel so bad for the uke, he was treated horribly by every adult he cared for and it's so hard to read, like 1) The seme, don't even get me started with this rapist [yes, pressuring someone to have sex with you and promising you'll stop after they do something with you is rape, and it's also rape when you break that promise] I honestly thought he was so cute on those first few chapters until he just started sexually assaulting the uke and being emotionally manipulative by saying "so I'm just a fuck and chuck?" when HE'S the one who forced the other, and trying to make it like the uke fell for him and was "becoming his true self" for his rapist? Diabolically hard read and honestly I'm dropping it because it's so painful to see that uke ends up with this pos in the end 2) Honestly I don't have much to say about the childhood friend since he actually knows consent and backs off when told no but him being so gleeful everytime uke's relationships failed and being upset for every new one he gets in because he has a crush that he refuses to tell him about? Dude nobody feels bad for you, deal with the consequences for your own actions dumbass 3) The ex-wife is a bitch for playing with the uke's feelings the way that she did, but honestly that's not the most upsetting part 'cause clearly that's just the author's way of setting aside the wife and writing the most surface-level woman that could stay out of the uke's life as much as possible, she's unfortunately just a plot device to get the uke a biological child, the worst part is her pushing together the uke and his rapist [given, she doesn't know that he raped him] like that fixes how much of an asshole she is, not to mention just the bullshit that the author is pulling to make the uke happy with his rapist when for multiple chapters he's shown uncomfortable with the idea of being with him romantically and is always being guilt tripped and forced into it, "you look happier than when you were with me" just pissed me off so bad, so all-in-all this was just a sad sad story of how the uke hasn't had a grown adult in his life actually show him real care and compassion and it's so sad to read this and are expected to believe somehow he got his "happy ending"
Second of all, y'all annoying asl calling this a hidden IvanTill dj, I get seeing vivimeng's art style in this but saying that you're only reading the story because you're pretending it's another person's work is so immature