i clicked on this thinking brown hair was their kid
Lmao I had to recheck the cover.
SAME GOODNOGHTH
I thought the same thing and then I saw the photos..omg
same holy fuck, instead i got hit w chernobyl level of toxicity right off the bat
Why did i take 7 business days to understand this
I didn’t even read the story.. on a level from 1-10 how… is it?
10 if u freaked 2 if otherwise
so he just hella freeballing under that robe? letting his cheeks breathe and shit
did a middle schooler write this
Lemme see your work
good try
?? Lmao by this response then it’s easy to assume you don’t have any! So sybau
ion have to have good work to see something is hot garbage lool
Actually you kinda do! Your criticism is ass move around
not evb has to like this corny ass porn like u
That true but it would’ve been better if you just fucked off instead of commenting something so mouth-breathingly stupid. Lame ass(≧∀≦)
stupid yet u could’ve also jus downvoted and scrolled
Oh look at that. I’m a nuisance to you like your comment is a nuisance to others. Oh how the world works
trust me nb cares that much
I absolutely get why you’d react like that but it absolutely makes no sense, because by your arugumentation nobody has the right to comment/criticize anything regarding topics they themselfs haven’t created. So you wouldn’t be able to criticize music, art, literature, movies, food (excepts ur a Chef) ect. Etc. yk :D also it is absolutely obvious that this is pure smut created for horny kinky fks so its not that deep it really has no story at all which is not bad because it meant to be a smut full short-story so it fulfilled it purpose. I don’t get neither you for defending it so erneastly as if we’re talking about Kafka or Shakespeare. Neither the other for asking if it is a middle schooler who wrote this while reading literally smut ? Like what did u expect? A 10/10 Novel with the craziest Plot and side characters with enourmous backstory and material, its a p0rn short story mguy.
said that cus the writing sucked btw not bc i actually thought a ms wrote it. ik it’s just smut doesn’t mean i can’t hate on it tho
Valid
ahh u mad
Not really but ight
i want euja to milk the shit out of this story like fargo did with liai
Or like pearl boy, giving them a brand new plot
the way he accepted the confession right away..? bro just upgraded to adulthood
mane why everyone talking about the cocks
because they ugly
they aren’t THAT bad. i didn’t even see any problem with them
aight nvm i reread earlier chapters they were def hideous
second couple is buns