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Love this author but jeez louise the uke is so damn passive, I'm only on Chapter 28 so I won't review yet but I really hope it gets better.
finished and enjoyed. The uke was still pretty passive but he become more resolute.
I kind of liked the seme eh except for the throwing himself on and forcing the uke, who btw was way too passive, until he decided so quickly that he would just throw his family away for the uke and his son. it was incredibly annoying since his family were not bad people whatsoever. He didn't even think to first talk to them again, going straight to cutting them off. Awful son, awful brother - he couldn't even think well of them enough to give them the benefit of the doubt and to process it all first.
I would be the first person to say "fuck your family" if they were bad people (man i live far from my family because we can't see eye to eye and they kept taking advantage of my being the eldest of all my cousins). But in this case, they weren't - the seme was the little shit. Sure, his younger brother was a narrow minded brat but that's because he didn't want anything to change and he had put his older brother on a pedestal. Sorry to tell you kid, apparently you and your family mean nothing to the seme. Maybe it is better off getting rid of some crap kid who apparently can only love one little group at a time and has so little regard of his own family that he's ready to rid himself of them.