beta
this ML is FUCKING TRASH!! IVE ONLY READ TO CH25 AND I CANT. this plot is flimsy and the FL is just being abused mentally/physically REPEATEDLY, BY LITERALLY EVERYONE.. everyone reminds her she’s a bastard, EVEN HER DAD. and once ML learns she’s super smart ml is like “damn i wish i brought her in sooner” TF IS UR PROB BRO YOUVE BEEN FUCKIN W HER SINCE DAY ONE.. and yk maybe it’s the translation n the mid writing but their chemistry is SHIT. ML pressures FL into pretty much every interaction, and doesn’t really care about FLs feelings
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instead of stereotypical: FL “oops i accidentally roofied you” ML: “bro wha?” *sex*
the ML is manipulative as fuck and has been tryna “escape” the friendzone for ages.. and bc the cookie roofies wouldn’t even work on him the ML pulled out a LEGIT aphrodisiac then said it was the cookies to lowkey/highkey coerce the FL into a relationship.. “look what YOU did,” “i’m like this because of YOUR cookies.” TEXTBOOK MANIPULATION. ML didn’t even really try- crack open a romance novel to learn, then WOO YOUR “IMPRINT” instead of being a CONNIVING BITCH.. the smut is decent ig, it’s just thigh fuckin rn (chap 6), ML doin lots of servicing and the FL is doing some.