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This has good writing, but it's also like, all over the damn place I'm confused asf tbh (I think I'm just stupid but idk(〜￣△￣)〜)
Nah, its just a nonlinear storyline
Oh my, I didn't know this type of storyline telling exists. Thx for the info lmao I searched on what that meant and this defo is nonlinear
No worries, it can totally be jarring cause you didnt expect them to keep jumping back and forth in time to tell the story hahaha.
I hate toxic bls so much, but then I got curious about this, toxic x toxic.. I got extremely intrigued. I don't regret reading this yall. The plot twist at the end was predictable cuz it was quite obvious that he was faking his memories, but the way they're both wrapped around each others finger...