
The plot is good. I just wish the mc was atleast in college. I know he's in hs but the char design makes it seem like he's in middle school. And the ML seems like he's in his mid to late twenties. It doesnt sit right with me. I wish the author made their ages more appropriate (ik this is a story about a murderer, so morals are out the window) but it wouldve made it a tad bit more enjoyable if they were depicted as closer in age.

My theory:
Dad went out to get supplies, leaving jinwoo
Thieves got in their hideout (possibly the hounds) tried to ransack their supplies, beat up jinwoo
Dad returned and fought off the thieves,
Dad left again to get water (possibly stealing some from gunwoo's party/the hounds)
Gunwoo follows the dad back to their hideout
Gunwoo kills dad for stealing
Gunwoo finds jinwoo.
What a boring reveal as to the origin of the jinx hahaha. I was hoping for something more as to how he came up with his "anti-jinx"
I feel you. I unrealistically hoping for some type of supernatural element, but anything more creative would've been better than this lame excuse, lol.