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I love the story but it’s too centered around coffee, I understand that’s her drive but the only plot is capturing everyone on her side with coffee. She fixed a literal 8 year eating disorder just with coffee, got wizards on her side who hates noble on side with coffee, got the old duke on her side with coffee, most of her conflicts is solved with coffee. It would make sense if this world was based in a universe of coffee addicts but it’s nothing but coffee. And the ml is just a walking misunderstanding, they added misunderstanding after misunderstanding when they can literally just say what’s in the thought bubbles. That’s literally the only continuous conflict.