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Overall this was a good story but i feel like yuuma and yuya need to meet again and reconcile!
We get introduced to the twins and get to know how yuuya absolutely loved yuuma and put him over anything else to the point of deluding himself into thinking his crush was actually in love with his brother. This leads to all sorts of misunderstandings and incredibly desperate measures and for some reason yuuma and yuuya dont meet again and clear things up?? He doesnt even meet his sort of son???? Well okk