beta
I couldn't even finish it. It was so preachy and long and the 90% of the conversations and things being said were just so long and annoying to read. Then the guy sucked with his ego, "I can touch you, you cant touch me", and narsasstic personality. I get it sets up for character development but it just pissed me off, I guess it just didn't combine well with the horrible pacing and overexplaning everything a million times. The first 6 chapters explain this guy's sister and the sucky guy's bratty thoughts over and over in every conversation. It was just boring and confusing to say the least.