beta
I really like this story
but the flow is a little off
like how u gonna introduce the blonde brother and then he becomes forgotten for 20 chapters?
even the stainless steel bit
honestly I think we would have gotten the same or an even better effect if she released her scalpels and then they did a quick flashback revealing she thought of the whole oxidation factor. like I thought it was dragged on a bit
but the actual plot is good and the romance is also good
plus the story is funny and cute I like it!
but I was able to enjoy it bc I binged it