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Honestly, at first I thought it was rushed. When I first read it, I thought there must be more to their story and this shouldn't be the end of it but now that I re-read it, the pacing was perfectly fine. I mean, they broke up, Leo admitted he was at fault, J.J. can't resist him, they made up because they still love each other and it didn't change. So there's no need to make it complicated, third party (although there was kinda at the beginning), another misunderstanding that's gonna make the story longer and more frustrating, and I'm glad there's none of that complicated bullshit. I really like its' linear storytelling, these are the stories we need nowadays, like a breath of fresh air.