beta
The plot is good, the story is interesting and immersive! The concept is nice and refreshing, the flow is kinda nice as well.
But the r scene was absolutely not necessary, I don't see how, I won't see why. Like?? Author's cooking downgraded on that one. That was kind of random.
AND THE KING KIDDO?? SOBS Wdym he's gone:(( ╥﹏╥